Cool story, i really looking forward on who is the survivor, what will Lawrence benefit from all this and more screen time for lovely Diana i mean she is so beautiful i want to have a route with her. I mean if theo is into some politician girl who is sick then go
For the latest build, I have mixed feelings about it. The story is very good until it reaches the part when Javier, Theo, and Helix return to Javier's apartment. I think that part is poorly executed. There were so many possibilities for how the story could end, but it concluded in a very predictable way. However, the bad ending is chef's kiss. The intensity of the story really hooked me. Also, Build 11 is the best build so far. The blackout part/lore is done perfectly. Thank you for creating this novel, and I can't wait for the Rou routes
Thanks for the feedback! No two endings will share similar traits and Javier's route mainly focused on the investigation of Blackout and not the general mystery at large.
Rou's route will cover many of the questions left unanswered in Javier's route.
I like this game love the story the investigation aspect the characters I got both ending for Javier's route but my main problem is that there isn't much time spent with javier i like rou but i think the story would benefit from having theodore spend more time with Javier so you care about him more during the story if something happened to javier in rou route it would be less impactful because you aren't close to him in the story like you are with rou but I might be biased because I like foxes again i love this game just think the game would benefit from this
Oh, I'm really happy to see how Javier's route end, more than I expected. Also, Magnus is so fucking hot (I'm sorry, Rou). It just feels like a lot of things haven't been fully explained yet and hopefully will be answered in the Rou's route. Can't wait to see the next Rou's route. In addition, I don't know if the sprites that Rou, Javier and Theodore will be updated. After all, the other characters are more three-dimensional and refined, and I hope to see that the three of them can also have that level of sprites. Anyway, I really enjoyed the game and thank you for your hard work.
I just played the latest build and I can just say the ending was awesome π. I love how it was named am[B]iguous and left us with open interpretation. I think there are going to be 2 more endings A and D for Rou route?
I've just finished reading this after found out about this VN for a while. I don't usually like detective-kind of story, I was under the impression it would be lengthy-info dump kind of writing (probably because of my past experience reading something with similar genre) and was actually going to just try it for the mystery/thriller tag in it.
But. Wow. Just... Wow.
I really, really love the writing style so much. All the characters are so very expressive. And how descriptive it is to explain about things/scene that happens, it's just. I wasn't expecting it to be this good."I love it, I love this VN" on just about 1/5 part of it. Not only are all the characters being hot as hell, but the way also the story unfold, doesn't seem rushed. The pace is just right. I really, really can't wait for it to continue. I really want to know what will happen to Rou! Ugh, I'll let myself be in suspense, for now.
PS: Rou is hot as fuck. Sorry.
PPS: Monti with an "I" is definitely my spirit animal.
that is a feature more vns need to give easy access to btw pro tip any renpy game if u dont see the setting for the dyslexic font u can always hit shift + A and an additional pref window will pop up
Hi there, you need to go to archives in the extras page. If you don't see the side story there, you may need to read further in the story before some are unlocked.
WHAT THE....... PLEASE tell me this IS NOT the end! I gotta find out what happens to Rou, I fell in love with the big wolf and need to know. Don't want to spoil any thing but some low life needs an A5S kicking!
Thai may be rude to write and sorry in advance to anyone who does find it rude
BUT when it comes to the art style on the websites page we see David who looks alright, your normal character but then if I just look a bit more to the right we got this random boar stranger who has WAY MORE DETAIL and stuff. My question is that did they ever change the older stuff to meet the current art style (since either he commissioned a different artist or the artist improved) since the older art looks good while the new art style looks GREAT.
Again sorry but I would like to know. It just really bugs me when I read something and I see a massive art style change (again sorry, Iβm just peckish)
Hey! I totally forgot to update the preview screenshots for David, thanks for reminding me.
Regarding your question, we're currently putting time and funding into creating more sprites for new characters (with the new style) than redo-ing the old ones. Once we're done creating new characters, we'll slowly redo old sprites that need refreshing. So far we've updated David, Kristoffer, and Dust's.
Thank you for replying and im happy to see that eventually you update the old sprites. Even if it takes a while i dont care or mind since certain cases someone has finished a story and left old characters looking... well not bad but you get it and then new character outstanding
Anyway merry christmas and hope you have a great new year
This novel is GOOD!!! After following this novel for the past year I gotta say, I loved returning to this story after each new update. The vibe it takes is cool and it makes being a private investigator so interesting. There's memorable characters, there's tension & stakes, and a lot of pieces to think about in the plot. The music is good too
Very well made piece. What y'all are making is awesome π
It's a good FVN, I'm a fan of mystery, action and thriller. The characters are great, the story is very interesting, Rou; your main love interest is a real badass and his fox partner Javier; is an amazing character. Read it for a good chunk of six hours from the start until the latest update. The events of the story left me on the edge of my seat, it got really intense and the MC; Theodore is honestly so relatable with being confused and just going along with the fucked up shit he got himself into. Can't wait for the ending so that the MC just goes "bro you wouldn't believe what the hell I just went through in my vacation."
An error shows up when I tried playing the Halloween arc.
While running game code:
File "game/src/script/halloween/halloween_vfx.rpy", line 125, in render
File "game/src/script/halloween/halloween_vfx.rpy", line 89, in render
File "game/src/script/halloween/halloween_vfx.rpy", line 86, in transform
ZeroDivisionError: float division by zero
I couldn't replicate this issue when playing over the latest build. Could you provide more details on when this triggers and/or join the discord server so we can investigate this further?
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Cool story, i really looking forward on who is the survivor, what will Lawrence benefit from all this and more screen time for lovely Diana i mean she is so beautiful i want to have a route with her. I mean if theo is into some politician girl who is sick then go
---Spoiler---
For the latest build, I have mixed feelings about it. The story is very good until it reaches the part when Javier, Theo, and Helix return to Javier's apartment. I think that part is poorly executed. There were so many possibilities for how the story could end, but it concluded in a very predictable way. However, the bad ending is chef's kiss. The intensity of the story really hooked me. Also, Build 11 is the best build so far. The blackout part/lore is done perfectly. Thank you for creating this novel, and I can't wait for the Rou routes
Thanks for the feedback! No two endings will share similar traits and Javier's route mainly focused on the investigation of Blackout and not the general mystery at large.
Rou's route will cover many of the questions left unanswered in Javier's route.
This might be a spoiler idk
I like this game love the story the investigation aspect the characters I got both ending for Javier's route but my main problem is that there isn't much time spent with javier i like rou but i think the story would benefit from having theodore spend more time with Javier so you care about him more during the story if something happened to javier in rou route it would be less impactful because you aren't close to him in the story like you are with rou but I might be biased because I like foxes again i love this game just think the game would benefit from this
Oh, I'm really happy to see how Javier's route end, more than I expected. Also, Magnus is so fucking hot (I'm sorry, Rou). It just feels like a lot of things haven't been fully explained yet and hopefully will be answered in the Rou's route. Can't wait to see the next Rou's route. In addition, I don't know if the sprites that Rou, Javier and Theodore will be updated. After all, the other characters are more three-dimensional and refined, and I hope to see that the three of them can also have that level of sprites. Anyway, I really enjoyed the game and thank you for your hard work.
god i love magnus
nice build btw
Thanks!
Love the mystery at the end of Javier's route! I can't wait to see things are explained in Rou's route
SPOILER ALERT!!
I just played the latest build and I can just say the ending was awesome π. I love how it was named am[B]iguous and left us with open interpretation. I think there are going to be 2 more endings A and D for Rou route?
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um... idk whats going on but if i try at all to go full screen the page starts flashing like crazy
ps: i just found out i had opendyslexic turned on and after turning that off the flashing stops when in full screen
Hi,
May we know what machine are you using to play the game?
Thanks!
yes im using a lenovo think pad p52 with a quadro 2000 graphics card
I got a few questions before I start reading this (I'll get it when build 12 is out)
1. Do I get to edit my name into the story?
2. Does this have horror in it? specifically gore and dark stuff.
3. Are there hot men in it?
1. No
2. No, not really
3. Yes π
1. No
2. There's no gore stuff but there's a horror in extra story
3. YES!!
still cant believe javier hit the griddy
I've just finished reading this after found out about this VN for a while. I don't usually like detective-kind of story, I was under the impression it would be lengthy-info dump kind of writing (probably because of my past experience reading something with similar genre) and was actually going to just try it for the mystery/thriller tag in it.
But. Wow. Just... Wow.
I really, really love the writing style so much. All the characters are so very expressive. And how descriptive it is to explain about things/scene that happens, it's just. I wasn't expecting it to be this good. "I love it, I love this VN" on just about 1/5 part of it. Not only are all the characters being hot as hell, but the way also the story unfold, doesn't seem rushed. The pace is just right. I really, really can't wait for it to continue. I really want to know what will happen to Rou! Ugh, I'll let myself be in suspense, for now.
PS: Rou is hot as fuck. Sorry.
PPS: Monti with an "I" is definitely my spirit animal.
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Love the Dyslexic font feature! Always have trouble reading VNs so this makes it easier!
that is a feature more vns need to give easy access to btw pro tip any renpy game if u dont see the setting for the dyslexic font u can always hit shift + A and an additional pref window will pop up
oh wow! thank you so much!
yeah ofc just happy to help also love ur pfp lmao
Radcanine, your game is wonderful my god ππ π, Looking forward to the continuation of the story!!!
Thank you!
I love everything about this visual novel its perfect β¨
Espectacular!!! Me encanta estΓ‘ vn muy buen trabajo
Just download and finish the last update yesterday, best read in a while. Keep up the good job, cannot wait for the next update!
I wish I could give Javier a hug!!!
Hear me out....Promise by Laufey with Theodore x Dou current relationship π¬
this is so rea
Always nice to find a fellow laudey enjoyer
I really like this game and i want see end and what happend with Rou SOOO BAAAAD(((
Hello Radcanine! Love your visual novel!!! Just asking how can I see the side story in the extras?
Hi there, you need to go to archives in the extras page. If you don't see the side story there, you may need to read further in the story before some are unlocked.
Ohhhh! Okey thanks!!! π©΅π
WHAT THE....... PLEASE tell me this IS NOT the end!
I gotta find out what happens to Rou, I fell in love with the big wolf and need to know. Don't want to spoil any thing but some low life needs an A5S kicking!
There's one complete ending, and one that hasn't >wo the one that's finished is when Javier thinks "wrong"
Thai may be rude to write and sorry in advance to anyone who does find it rude
BUT when it comes to the art style on the websites page we see David who looks alright, your normal character but then if I just look a bit more to the right we got this random boar stranger who has WAY MORE DETAIL and stuff. My question is that did they ever change the older stuff to meet the current art style (since either he commissioned a different artist or the artist improved) since the older art looks good while the new art style looks GREAT.
Again sorry but I would like to know. It just really bugs me when I read something and I see a massive art style change (again sorry, Iβm just peckish)
Hey! I totally forgot to update the preview screenshots for David, thanks for reminding me.
Regarding your question, we're currently putting time and funding into creating more sprites for new characters (with the new style) than redo-ing the old ones. Once we're done creating new characters, we'll slowly redo old sprites that need refreshing. So far we've updated David, Kristoffer, and Dust's.
Thank you for replying and im happy to see that eventually you update the old sprites. Even if it takes a while i dont care or mind since certain cases someone has finished a story and left old characters looking... well not bad but you get it and then new character outstanding
Anyway merry christmas and hope you have a great new year
I wonder how long this vn will be when finished?
πππππ please be more
This novel is GOOD!!! After following this novel for the past year I gotta say, I loved returning to this story after each new update. The vibe it takes is cool and it makes being a private investigator so interesting. There's memorable characters, there's tension & stakes, and a lot of pieces to think about in the plot. The music is good too
Very well made piece. What y'all are making is awesome π
I made an account just to say the new build is CINEMA
cinema, more like sigma!!
high five anyone!
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sigma
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brainrot final boss
stupid dumbasses who are unsigma final boss
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love the new update...
It's a good FVN, I'm a fan of mystery, action and thriller. The characters are great, the story is very interesting, Rou; your main love interest is a real badass and his fox partner Javier; is an amazing character. Read it for a good chunk of six hours from the start until the latest update. The events of the story left me on the edge of my seat, it got really intense and the MC; Theodore is honestly so relatable with being confused and just going along with the fucked up shit he got himself into. Can't wait for the ending so that the MC just goes "bro you wouldn't believe what the hell I just went through in my vacation."
11/10. Great job devs.
too short but really perfect
I'm going to become the joker π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ«π«π«π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯πβ₯οΈπβ₯οΈπ«¦π«¦π«¦
the best vn I've ever seen. looking forward for the new updates π
I yelped when I reached the "to be continued" frame. lol, cannot wait for the next update π
I dont like the amnesia Story line
Same it feels like rou and theo are falling apart
Hi there, this issue should've been fixed with our latest small update. Did you just download this today?
An error shows up when I tried playing the Halloween arc.
I couldn't replicate this issue when playing over the latest build. Could you provide more details on when this triggers and/or join the discord server so we can investigate this further?
lawrence
I would like to disagree with this statement.
The way i audibly went "NOOO" when i read 'To Be Continued'. Can't wait for the next update. π
This keeps happening how do i fix this?
Let me look into the issue for you.
This issue has been fixed, and the download files has been updated.
Thanksssss
dang it i saw the update button before reading this (also dang u are ontop of these thats awesome dude
Is this tiger the new Regina George? Because it looks like (Personality)
that is so fetch
well it looks like Regina was wrong